The Asphalt Straight-a Young Boy's Thoughts
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The Asphalt Straight-a Young Boy's Thoughts
Posted: July 02 2008 08:27 PM
 
Skeet Creekmore (aka flagator79) [ View ] [ corvette@jam.rr.com ] [ Car Ads ] [ Blogs ]
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THE ASPHALT STRAIT: A YOUNG BOY'S THOUGHTS


I found this poem when I was moving out of my office at the University this week. I remember writing it when I was 11 years old while not doing the assigned writing assignment in English class. Loved fast cars even way back then - 54 years ago.


The Asphalt Strait


The night was dark

The hour was late

A boy had beefed his big Chevy 8

Not a person was up in the little town

He took his mill out to drive around


The engine was milled and ready to go

He knew that his rod was not just for show


The moon was high, the hour was late

He headed out to the asphalt strait


He got to the strip at quarter to one

To let his car wind, to let it run

He pulled to the line which was marked in white

The quarter looked long on that lonely night


He revved his mill up 'til it was tight

The engine was purring, everything was right

He pushed his foot all the way to the floor

And started to let his big mill roar


His big cheater slicks started to scream

In his minds eye this was all just a dream

A vision come true and all was right

He had finished his mill on that lonely night


He wound her up 'til the tach was on red

This was too much and he started to dread

That his mill would falter and let him down

But all that it did was tear up the ground


He changed gears to second with a fast speed shift

As this was done he felt the car drift

The big Chevy eight started to flip

Ended up twisted and turned at the end of the strip


The night was dark, the hour was late

A boy lay dead on the asphalt strait

A boy and his car on the asphalt strait


The next day at dawn the big mill was found

With the blood of this boy spilled on the ground


From that day to this, the strip has been closed

For something strange happened, but no one knows

Why the boy and his car got out of control

And started the big Chevy 8 into a roll


No one can tell, no one knows

But now the strip is forever taboo

The boy loved his car and knew it well

If something was wrong, then he could tell


But nothing was wrong when he took his last breath

And stayed with his mill undaunted by death


Some people say, when the moon is bright

And the sky is still on a lonely night

You can see the boy when the hour is late

The boy and his car on the asphalt strait


The night is dark

The hour is late

The boy and his car on the asphalt strait

Sitting alone, when the hour is late

Together forever on the asphalt strait


circa: 1954

Skeet Creekmore
 
 
 
Comments
 
Posted by da34guy  -  07/02/2008 08:37 PM
And now yer a poet also, Skeet?

What else??
Don [ View ] [ Email ] [ Blogs ] [ Car Ads ] Prescott, Arizona Charter Member since October 2001
 
Posted by flagator79  -  07/02/2008 08:46 PM
I just ran across it in the corner of my middle desk drawer. Hadn't seen it in about 20 years. I guess I was destined to find it to remind me of how much I have and for how long I have loved this hobby. Put a smile on my face and my heart -- lots of memories rushing back as I sit here in the quiet this evening. God hands out some really neat gifts in a quiet way from time to time.


Hope you are doing well my friend.


Skeet

(the poet but don't know it - but feet are longfellows)
If the world was fair, the worm would eat the bird half the time [ View ] [ Email ] [ Blogs ] [ Car Ads ] West Monroe, Louisianna Charter Member since December 2005
 
Posted by JAWS  -  07/02/2008 08:54 PM
Thanks Skeet. I needed that.
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Posted by TYCHOOCHOO  -  07/02/2008 09:28 PM
Skeet-- I can see where this would take you back. I enjoyed it.
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Posted by DavyJ  -  07/02/2008 09:47 PM
Skeet, great bit of memorabilia, make sure to put it back somewhere safe. Thanks for sharing it.
Still driving the wife's car, cause I am slow. [ View ] [ Email ] [ Blogs ] [ Car Ads ] Niagara Falls, Canada Charter Member since February 2005
 
Posted by dixie  -  07/03/2008 12:15 AM
Skeet i loved it brings back so many memorys. thank you have a good nite.

DIXIE
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Posted by tlp1968  -  07/03/2008 12:26 AM
Wow Skeet you were a very talented young man!! No wonder you became the professor. It is also surreal how that takes me back to street racing when I was 16. Common memories bind us.
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Posted by dakotah  -  07/03/2008 01:15 PM
Nice,should be published.
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